I Don't Believe in Love is a contemporary romance novel that follows Ana, a woman who has learned to value her solitude and independence after a tumultuous past and a controlling mother. Despite falling in love, Ana maintains her ideals and sense of identity, navigating the complexities of a new relationship without losing herself. I’m seeking feedback to ensure Ana's character remains true to her beliefs throughout the story.

Requirements & Requests

I am seeking constructive feedback on the following aspects of my manuscript: Character Development: Detailed insights on the growth and depth of the characters, particularly ensuring the protagonist is perceived as strong and independent without coming across as preachy. It is important that readers understand her motivations and empathize with her. Pacing: Comments on the flow and pacing of the story, ensuring it maintains a good rhythm and keeps the reader engaged throughout. Portrayal of the Protagonist: Feedback on how well the protagonist's journey is depicted, with a focus on her emotional depth and resilience. I want to ensure her feminist ideals are clear but not overbearing. Romance: Thoughts on the romantic elements of the story, ensuring the romance feels genuine and natural rather than forced. Supporting Characters: Observations on the development of all characters, ensuring each has a clear purpose and contributes meaningfully to the story. Emotional Connection: Insights on how well the story fosters an emotional connection with the reader, particularly through the protagonist's experiences and challenges. Detailed comments on these aspects will be highly appreciated to help refine and strengthen the narrative.

Comparable Stories:

"The Rosie Project" by Graeme Simsion Relation: Both feature a protagonist who undergoes significant personal growth and learns to open up emotionally through a romantic relationship. "Me Before You" by Jojo Moyes Relation: Focuses on the protagonist’s growth and emotional development through a romantic relationship, similar to Ana's journey of learning to let people in. "One Day" by David Nicholls Relation: Centers on the evolving relationship between two characters and their personal growth over time, mirroring Ana’s gradual emotional openness. "Attachments" by Rainbow Rowell Relation: Explores a developing relationship and personal growth through unique circumstances, akin to Ana’s secretive romance and eventual emotional development. "The Hating Game" by Sally Thorne Relation: Features a romantic relationship with initial tension that evolves over time, similar to the development of Ana’s relationship and her journey towards openness. "The Flatshare" by Beth O'Leary Relation: Focuses on an unconventional relationship that leads to personal growth and emotional connection, paralleling Ana’s unique romantic dynamic and personal journey.

Trigger Warnings:

sexual assault sexual content