The Scars Underneath | A Fantasy Novel

Layla has always known what she were - not human enough. And she has always known that the creatures that visit her when asleep were as real as she will ever be. She’d just started settling in after having her world ripped apart in front of her eyes. But when this new life of hers turns upside down when her brother gets cursed, she simply cannot let go. Not again. Layla and her friends rather chase a myth and try to defy fate - by simply having faith, and a little magic running through their veins.

Details

  • Age Group:Young Adult (13-18)
  • Manuscript TypeFull Manuscript
  • Draft Number:Third Draft
  • Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 120,000
  • Spice Level2 Peppers (light spice)

Primary Genre:

  • Fantasy
  • Romance

Themes & Tropes

  • Action & Adventure
  • Complex World Building
  • Morally Grey
  • Paranormal
  • Romantasy

Requirements & Requests

I am not looking for someone to rewrite my story, I am looking for someone who can provide an overall feedback, tell me which parts they enjoyed and which parts they hated, what they think of the vibe in general, which parts or spesfic scentences were unclear and confusing, etc.. ( I will be sending a list of questions to keep things organized )

Comparable Stories:

I'd say that the cloest thing to my story is Percy Jackson beacuse they both have they both have the following elements: - Quest - Magic passing from father​/​mother to children - Found family

Trigger Warnings:

Abandonment Attempted rape Blood and gore Drug Use Drugging Grief and loss Murder Physical Abuse Revenge Suicide Torture Trauma Violence

Manuscript Format

  • Google Doc
  • PDF

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