I am Aisling. When the embodiment of the universe, the Omni, has visions the reincarnations will descend the Great Mountains to warn the Nine Kingdoms rulers of future perils that will destroy the Arcus Empire. Yet when Peter, the Kinetic Kingdom prince, who caused the Omni’s death repeatedly in the past searches for her again, the universe gives a vision to Aisling, the Omni, leading her to explore the nine kingdoms, speak to the heirs about their plans for the future, and try to avoid the murdering icy eyed prince who is on a mission to kill her to claim his crown. The strings of fate are ever changing but it is destined that the icy eyes of the Tele Prince will destroy the stars written in the Omni’s eyes, leaving only golden scars to tell what has been done.

Requirements & Requests

Read within one month if possible and add thoughts​/​impression​/​suggestion within the google doc that is sent to you. I want your honest opinion on the story!!

Comparable Stories:

A book compared to THE UNIVERSE IN HER EYES is Powerless by Lauren Roberts due to multiple powers being showcased in the book, all varying in degree and the concept of individuals with no powers being present. However, the focus of my book is on the most powerful person, The Omni, rather than a powerless individual. Another comp to THE UNIVERSE IN HER EYES is The Invisible Life of Addie Larue by V.E. Schwab. The story is written in a similar flowery poetic present tense prose diving you deep into the world and the mind of the character. Pinterest Link if interested in the aesthetic: https://www.pinterest.com/amanda15aubin/universe-in-her-eyes/

Trigger Warnings:

Over 18 recommended Death Threats, Fighting, Attempts on Life of Character Death: deliberate killing of an infant (light description), & death via horse (blood in mild description)