Find the gem. Save the Kingdom. Don’t fall in love. Hunters are the King's favoured warriors. They’re charged with defending the kingdom from Chaos and its beasts. Continuously rejected from their ranks, Nara is determined to prove herself. Unfortunately for her, this means risking everything she’s worked for by allying with the Chaos to find a weapon capable of defending her city. Elias wields the Chaos, a powerful magic with a mind of its own. He’s no stranger to the murderous Hunters that travel through his forest. So, when Nara comes stumbling into the ancient woods, with an obviously stolen cloak, he’s intrigued... but not enough to spare her life.

Requirements & Requests

I’m looking for genuine thoughts you have and don’t be afraid of hurting my feelings, I love constructive criticism. I prefer you be as clear as possible and leave nothing open for interpretation. I'm looking for anything that takes you out of the story, interrupts flow or pacing. World-building issues, or things that perhaps need more explaining. Thoughts on the characters etc. I would love to know your thoughts while reading. If you are comfortable sharing :)

Comparable Stories:

Emily Wildes encyclopidea of faries, by heather fawcett is the closest type of comp I know of.

Trigger Warnings:

Violence, graphic descriptions, occasional profanity, abduction, SA illuded to: not on page, general trauma.