The Fractured Mind | Fantasy

When Eli finally gets comfortable in his new job, a dire crisis sends his mind into chaos as his mental aspects fight for control of his mind and body. In the quagmire of crisis, Dark Shards are going missing, and Mania has to convince Perspective and Patience that her kind are worth saving only to discover a deeper power is abducting dark aspects.

Details

  • Age Group:Adult (18+)
  • Manuscript TypeSingle Chapter
  • Draft Number:Draft 4+
  • Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 5,000 words
  • Spice LevelNo Spice

Story Type:

  • Novel

Primary Genre:

  • Fantasy

Themes & Tropes

  • Dark
  • Neurodivergent
  • Psychological

Requirements & Requests

At this point, I am looking for feedback on style, tone, and initial characterization to set up for a more in-depth exploration of how various aspects of a person's mind, including symptoms of mental illness, challenge a person's mind and responses to various scenarios.

Comparable Stories:

While exploring a different point of views with a darker plot, the concept of mental aspects affecting a person would be most similar to the movie "Inside Out".

Trigger Warnings:

Alludes to suicidal ideation

Manuscript Format

  • Google Doc
  • PDF
  • DOC or .DOCX

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