Edna, a fourth-generation exorcist, is investigating a possible ghost sighting in an abandoned prison. Was the cause of death an accident or something more sinister?

Requirements & Requests

I just want to know if everything makes sense within the context, and that I'm not being inadvertently offensive considering I'm partially writing about Japanese culture​/​lore. Also, check if my spelling​/​grammar is accurate and don't be afraid to suggest edits.

Trigger Warnings:

Murder, attempted sexual assault​/​rape (doesn't actually happen), blood, dead body description with maggots, paranormal activity