A former investigative journalist suffering from memory loss finds himself inexplicably working in a dreamlike café, where familiar faces and a recurring name—Lola—begin to unravel the boundaries between reality, identity, and the past.

Requirements & Requests

Hi there, This is my first completed short story, and I’m excited to share it! I’d really appreciate it if you could proofread it and offer any constructive feedback—whether it’s grammar, structure, style, or general impressions. I’m open to critiques and eager to improve, so feel free to be honest. Thanks so much for taking the time to read it!

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