Title: [Untitled] Genre: Science Fiction ​/​ Philosophical Dystopia Setting: A bleak, corporatized future on the planet Demanska, where chemically created laborers called brainoids serve humanity without emotion or autonomy. Summary: Kit, a brainoid designed for tireless labor and obedience, begins experiencing intrusive thoughts and a mysterious voice in his head—an enigmatic entity that questions his programmed existence. After a disturbing incident involving his knowledge prism and a growing sense of dissonance, Kit is imprisoned by his caretaker, Mother, who plans to erase and replace his organic brain. Driven by fear and the voice's cryptic guidance, Kit escapes into the dangerous outer world. Hunted by authorities, extremist groups, and the Blood Runners (a violent gang he later joins and abandons), Kit struggles to define his identity amid chaos. He briefly finds purpose in a cult that worships him as a divine figure, but internal divisions fracture the movement. When his only friend is kidnapped, Kit risks everything to rescue him—only to find him dead and suffer betrayal at the hands of the gang. Resurrected by the voice and finally freed from all external control, Kit leads the remains of the cult in a final act of defiance. The story ends with Kit no longer obeying any ideology—neither the voice, the systems of power, nor the remnants of his own programming. He becomes something entirely new. Themes: Autonomy vs. control Identity and consciousness Philosophical rebellion The collapse of ideology Existential awakening

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Comparable Stories:

Evangelion, Dune

Trigger Warnings:

Body disassembly