Gefalltoian Rebirth - Dark Historical Fantasy​/​Horror

Ylva L'Ange, a several centuries' old vampire, is tired of life. She just wants to end her painful existence having been setup into an arranged marriage to a man she despises, but doesn't believe she's worthy of it. Until she meets an orphaned little boy who turns her life around.

Details

  • Age Group:New Adult (18-25)
  • Manuscript TypeFull Manuscript
  • Draft Number:Third Draft
  • Word Count (Rounded Up):Over 140,000
  • Spice Level1 Pepper (hardly any spice)

Story Type:

  • Novel

Primary Genre:

  • Fiction
  • Fantasy
  • Historical Fiction
  • Horror

Themes & Tropes

  • Action & Adventure
  • Alternate History
  • Complex World Building
  • Dark
  • Diverse Voices
  • Drama
  • Gothic
  • High Stakes
  • Historical
  • Horor
  • Mistaken or Hidden Identity
  • Morally Grey
  • Mythology
  • Mystery
  • Multi POV
  • Neurodivergent
  • Paranormal
  • Psychological
  • Witches | Vampires | Werwolves
  • 18+

Requirements & Requests

I humbly request any reader to give this story a chance and follow it as best they can. I would like to know where things can be improved, where things can be enhanced (lore, history, Japanese culture​/​language, relationships, action, etc.), and how to better present things such as trauma and redemption in much clearer ways.

Comparable Stories:

This work has so many inspirations it's difficult to nail down works it's similar to, but here's my best shot: Bastard by Carnby Kim Dracula by Bram Stoker Perfume: the Story of a Murderer by Patrick Süskind Devil's Line by Ryo Hanada Owari no Seraph (Seraph of the End) by Takaya Kagami Case Study of Vanitas by Jun Mochizuki A Series of Unfortunate Events by Lemony Snicket North and South by John Jakes The Thorn Birds by Colleen McCullough Ladyhawke (film) Snow White and the Huntsman (film)

Trigger Warnings:

References to sexual assault Physical abuse Mild racism Mental illness Trauma Grief Vomiting Religious anxiety Mild, occasional gore

Manuscript Format

  • Google Doc
  • DOC or .DOCX

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