Gefalltoian Rebirth - Dark Historical Fantasy/Horror
Ylva L'Ange, a several centuries' old vampire, is tired of life. She just wants to end her painful existence having been setup into an arranged marriage to a man she despises, but doesn't believe she's worthy of it. Until she meets an orphaned little boy who turns her life around.
Details
- Age Group:New Adult (18-25)
- Manuscript TypeFull Manuscript
- Draft Number:Third Draft
- Word Count (Rounded Up):Over 140,000
- Spice Level1 Pepper (hardly any spice)
Story Type:
- Novel
Primary Genre:
- Fiction
- Fantasy
- Historical Fiction
- Horror
Themes & Tropes
- Action & Adventure
- Alternate History
- Complex World Building
- Dark
- Diverse Voices
- Drama
- Gothic
- High Stakes
- Historical
- Horor
- Mistaken or Hidden Identity
- Morally Grey
- Mythology
- Mystery
- Multi POV
- Neurodivergent
- Paranormal
- Psychological
- Witches | Vampires | Werwolves
- 18+
Requirements & Requests
I humbly request any reader to give this story a chance and follow it as best they can. I would like to know where things can be improved, where things can be enhanced (lore, history, Japanese culture/language, relationships, action, etc.), and how to better present things such as trauma and redemption in much clearer ways.
Comparable Stories:
This work has so many inspirations it's difficult to nail down works it's similar to, but here's my best shot: Bastard by Carnby Kim Dracula by Bram Stoker Perfume: the Story of a Murderer by Patrick Süskind Devil's Line by Ryo Hanada Owari no Seraph (Seraph of the End) by Takaya Kagami Case Study of Vanitas by Jun Mochizuki A Series of Unfortunate Events by Lemony Snicket North and South by John Jakes The Thorn Birds by Colleen McCullough Ladyhawke (film) Snow White and the Huntsman (film)
Trigger Warnings:
References to sexual assault Physical abuse Mild racism Mental illness Trauma Grief Vomiting Religious anxiety Mild, occasional gore
Manuscript Format
- Google Doc
- DOC or .DOCX