When The Moon Weeps - Dark Fantasy, Feminist, Plot-Centric.
They will tell you that before there was woman, there was man. This is the first lie of many. For 500 years, the realm has been under the regime of a new world order. The Sacrosanctum Ministry. The histories have been rewritten, the tempes and god-cities destroyed. All to make way for the Church of the One True Lord - and the Sacrosanctum has been working hard to suppress the power that belongs to women by birthright, by blood and bone. Years pass. Witches are slaughtered. The old ways erased. And somewhere deep in the Irewoods, under the winking eye of a dark moon and in the heart of a snowstorm, Moira finds two young girls shivering in the snow.
Details
- Age Group:New Adult (18-25)
- Manuscript TypeFull Manuscript
- Draft Number:Draft 4+
- Word Count (Rounded Up):Over 140,000
- Spice Level1 Pepper (hardly any spice)
Story Type:
- Novel
Primary Genre:
- Fantasy
Themes & Tropes
- Action & Adventure
- Complex World Building
- Dark
- Fae
- LGBTQA+
- Multi POV
- Witches | Vampires | Werwolves
Requirements & Requests
Requests!! - I'd love feedback on character development. There are two characters I feel are still lackluster, and want to get an alternative POV. - Please read the entire thing, if possible! This is meant to be the first installment of a three part series, meaning many questions will go unanswered. - The romantic tone is queer, and while romance is not the primary plot of the story, it is an aspect (very early stages.)
Comparable Stories:
Fifth season.
Trigger Warnings:
Blood, gore, violence, mentions of SA.
Manuscript Format
- PDF