Army training is never easy. Army training by actual vampires? Sounds impossible. Impossible or not it was always a dream for Lorna. Taking her only chance, she gets herself into the training. Will she become the greatest warrior or was it the worst decision of her life?

Requirements & Requests

I'm mostly interested to know your opinion about plot, pace, writing style and characters. But if you can advise something about the use of language, grammar and punctuation that would be much appreciated as well

Comparable Stories:

Fourth Wing by Rebecca Yarros, Divergent by Veronica Roth

Trigger Warnings:

TWs include but not limited to explicit sexual content, on page violence and detailed descriptions of war, family issues, mental struggles, strong language, death, etc.