It's the first book of my planned trilogy. The first book follows a girl who discovers she has magical abilities and is the heir to the throne. The first book focuses on scene setting and world-building, so there's not that much action in it.

Requirements & Requests

The first book focuses a lot on world-building and setting the scene, so it might start off a bit slow. I’d love to hear your thoughts, especially on the pacing, clarity, and anything else that stands out to you. I'm translating my book from German to English and ince English isn't my native language, I'm looking for feedback on my translated chapters.

Comparable Stories:

The Lux series by Jennifer L. Armentrout, Powerless by Lauren Roberts, Shadow&Bone by Leigh Bardugo, From Blood and Ash by Jennifer L. Armentrout

Trigger Warnings:

Underage use of alcohol & depiction of blood