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๐™ธ ๐š”๐š—๐š˜๐š  ๐š’๐šโ€™๐šœ ๐šœ๐šž๐š–๐š–๐šŽ๐š›, ๐š‹๐šž๐š ๐š ๐š‘๐š˜โ€™๐šœ ๐šŠ๐š•๐š›๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š๐šข ๐š•๐š˜๐š˜๐š”๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š๐š˜๐š›๐š ๐šŠ๐š›๐š ๐š๐š˜ ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐šŒ๐š˜๐šฃ๐šข ๐šŸ๐š’๐š‹๐šŽ๐šœ ๐š˜๐š ๐šŠ๐šž๐š๐šž๐š–๐š—? ๐™ธโ€™๐š– ๐šœ๐šŽ๐šŽ๐š”๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š‹๐šŽ๐š๐šŠ ๐š›๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š๐šŽ๐š›๐šœ ๐š๐š˜๐š› ๐š–๐šข ๐šž๐š™๐šŒ๐š˜๐š–๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š—๐š˜๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š• ๐šœ๐šŽ๐š ๐š’๐š— ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐šŽ๐š—๐šŒ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š—๐š๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š๐š˜๐š ๐š— ๐š˜๐š ๐™ท๐šŠ๐š•๐š•๐š˜๐š โ€™๐šœ ๐™ด๐š—๐š, ๐šŒ๐š˜๐š–๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š˜๐šž๐š ๐š“๐šž๐šœ๐š ๐š’๐š— ๐š๐š’๐š–๐šŽ ๐š๐š˜๐š› ๐™ท๐šŠ๐š•๐š•๐š˜๐š ๐šŽ๐šŽ๐š—! ๐‘จ๐’ƒ๐’๐’–๐’• ๐’•๐’‰๐’† ๐’ƒ๐’๐’๐’Œ: ๐™ท๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š›๐š๐š‹๐š›๐š˜๐š”๐šŽ๐š— ๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐šœ๐šŽ๐šŽ๐š”๐š’๐š—๐š ๐šŠ ๐š๐š›๐šŽ๐šœ๐š‘ ๐šœ๐š๐šŠ๐š›๐š, ๐™ป๐šŠ๐šŸ๐š’๐š—๐š’๐šŠ โ€œ๐š…๐š’๐š—๐š—๐š’๐šŽโ€ ๐™ฒ๐šŠ๐š›๐š•๐š’๐šœ๐š•๐šŽ ๐š๐š•๐šŽ๐šŽ๐šœ ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐šŒ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š˜๐šœ ๐š˜๐š ๐šŒ๐š’๐š๐šข ๐š•๐š’๐š๐šŽ ๐š๐š˜ ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐šš๐šž๐šŠ๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š๐š˜๐š ๐š— ๐š˜๐š ๐™ท๐šŠ๐š•๐š•๐š˜๐š โ€™๐šœ ๐™ด๐š—๐š. ๐™ธ๐š— ๐š๐š‘๐š’๐šœ ๐š™๐š’๐šŒ๐š๐šž๐š›๐šŽ๐šœ๐šš๐šž๐šŽ ๐šœ๐šŽ๐š๐š๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š˜๐š ๐šŒ๐š˜๐š‹๐š‹๐š•๐šŽ๐šœ๐š๐š˜๐š—๐šŽ ๐šœ๐š๐š›๐šŽ๐šŽ๐š๐šœ ๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐š๐šŽ๐šœ๐š๐š’๐šŸ๐šŽ ๐šŠ๐šž๐š๐šž๐š–๐š— ๐šŠ๐š’๐š›, ๐šœ๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š–๐šŽ๐šŽ๐š๐šœ ๐™ด๐š๐š‘๐šŠ๐š—, ๐šŠ ๐š ๐šŠ๐š›๐š–-๐š‘๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š›๐š๐šŽ๐š ๐š๐šŽ๐šŠ๐šŒ๐š‘๐šŽ๐š›, ๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐™ธ๐šŸ๐šข, ๐šŠ ๐š ๐š‘๐š’๐š–๐šœ๐š’๐šŒ๐šŠ๐š• ๐š‹๐š˜๐š˜๐š”๐šœ๐š‘๐š˜๐š™ ๐š˜๐š ๐š—๐šŽ๐š›. ๐™ฐ๐šœ ๐šœ๐š™๐šŠ๐š›๐š”๐šœ ๐š๐š•๐šข ๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐š—๐šŽ๐š  ๐š๐š›๐š’๐šŽ๐š—๐š๐šœ๐š‘๐š’๐š™๐šœ ๐š‹๐š•๐š˜๐šœ๐šœ๐š˜๐š–, ๐š…๐š’๐š—๐š—๐š’๐šŽ ๐š–๐šž๐šœ๐š ๐šŒ๐š˜๐š—๐š๐š›๐š˜๐š—๐š ๐š‘๐šŽ๐š› ๐š•๐š’๐š—๐š๐šŽ๐š›๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š๐šŽ๐šŽ๐š•๐š’๐š—๐š๐šœ ๐š๐š˜๐š› ๐š‘๐šŽ๐š› ๐šŽ๐šก, ๐š‚๐šŽ๐š‹๐šŠ๐šœ๐š๐š’๐šŠ๐š—, ๐š ๐š‘๐š˜ ๐šœ๐šž๐š๐š๐šŽ๐š—๐š•๐šข ๐š›๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š™๐š™๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š›๐šœ. ๐™ฒ๐šŠ๐šž๐š๐š‘๐š ๐š‹๐šŽ๐š๐š ๐šŽ๐šŽ๐š— ๐š‘๐šŽ๐š› ๐š™๐šŠ๐šœ๐š ๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐šŠ๐š— ๐šž๐š—๐šŒ๐šŽ๐š›๐š๐šŠ๐š’๐š— ๐š๐šž๐š๐šž๐š›๐šŽ, ๐š…๐š’๐š—๐š—๐š’๐šŽโ€™๐šœ ๐š“๐š˜๐šž๐š›๐š—๐šŽ๐šข ๐š’๐šœ ๐š˜๐š—๐šŽ ๐š˜๐š ๐šœ๐šŽ๐š•๐š-๐š๐š’๐šœ๐šŒ๐š˜๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š›๐šข, ๐š‘๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š•๐š’๐š—๐š, ๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐šŽ๐š—๐šŒ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š—๐š๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š–๐šŠ๐š๐š’๐šŒ ๐š˜๐š ๐šœ๐šŽ๐šŒ๐š˜๐š—๐š ๐šŒ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š—๐šŒ๐šŽ๐šœ. ๐“๐ซ๐จ๐ฉ๐ž๐ฌ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎโ€™๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ž: - ๐Ÿก Small Town Romance - ๐Ÿ”ฅ Light Spice - โœจ Magical Realism - ๐Ÿ’” Healing a Broken Heart - ๐ŸŒŸ Self-Discovery - ๐Ÿถ Golden Retriever MMC - ๐Ÿง™โ€โ™€๏ธ Witchy Best Friend

Details

  • Age Group:New Adult (18-25)
  • Manuscript TypeFull Manuscript
  • Draft Number:Third Draft
  • Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 80,000
  • Spice Level2 Peppers (light spice)

Primary Genre:

  • Fiction
  • Romance

Themes & Tropes

  • Contemporary
  • Cozy
  • Holiday Romance

Requirements & Requests

Overall plot and character critique. Any comments and suggestions for improvement

Comparable Stories:

Alice Hoffman's "Practical Magic" and Sarah Addison Allen's "Garden Spellsโ€

Trigger Warnings:

None

Manuscript Format

  • DOC or .DOCX

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