Years after the great revolt of the “grays”, in Dream Land the division between black and white does not exist anymore. But on earth it still does, and eventually a war between the two factions starts. Arianna, in the meantime, finds out that her mother is a liar, that she is actually a half genie half wizard-witch, and so, she decides to run away in the magical realm, disobeying her. The conflict somehow, unknown by Arianna, reaches even Dream Land, involving even the summer camp for young genies she’s attending. Unfortunately during one of the battles the person she loves most gets killed off. Because of that she makes a wish and finds herself cursed to be stuck in a loop until she finds a way to save her. But why does she never succeed in this? Why does it seem like fate is all connected to her? Is she even trying to save the right person? And why does her mother sister seems to have a part in this?

Requirements & Requests

I’m searching for someone to read what I’ve written so far and to tell me if it is engaging to read and what they think of the writing ad the character (and what could have been done better) Also take in account that english is not my first language and this is just a translation I made so there could be any errors (please signal them, if you find any, since I’m using this even to practice english).

Trigger Warnings:

Violence, mentions of suicide