Chains of Gold | Mafia Dark Romantic Comedy

After a traumatic event that makes her a household name, a girl is recruited by a secret organization that delivers vigilante justice and partnered up with the leader's jaded nephew to learn the trade. Dual POV between FMC and MMC.

Details

  • Age Group:Adult (18+)
  • Manuscript TypeSingle Chapter
  • Draft Number:First Draft (spell-checked)
  • Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 5,000 words
  • Spice Level4 Peppers (extra spice)

Story Type:

  • Novel

Primary Genre:

  • Romance

Themes & Tropes

  • Dark
  • Morally Grey
  • 18+

Requirements & Requests

This is my first time writing a novel and I'm looking for feedback on my characters. Are their motivations clear? Do the FMC and MMC have chemistry and witty banter that is fun to read? I would like a critique partner to send completed chapters to as I write. The overall plot might shift, but will stay true to the description above ^. The characters should meet the chemistry​/​banter requirements at every stage though!

Comparable Stories:

Inspirations: Butcher & Blackbird by Brynne Weaver, Lights Out by Navessa Allen, Rook & Rebel by Kate Crew

Trigger Warnings:

Murder, Killing, more to come

Manuscript Format

  • Google Doc
  • PDF

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