Chains of Gold | Mafia Dark Romantic Comedy
After a traumatic event that makes her a household name, a girl is recruited by a secret organization that delivers vigilante justice and partnered up with the leader's jaded nephew to learn the trade. Dual POV between FMC and MMC.
Details
- Age Group:Adult (18+)
- Manuscript TypeSingle Chapter
- Draft Number:First Draft (spell-checked)
- Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 5,000 words
- Spice Level4 Peppers (extra spice)
Story Type:
- Novel
Primary Genre:
- Romance
Themes & Tropes
- Dark
- Morally Grey
- 18+
Requirements & Requests
This is my first time writing a novel and I'm looking for feedback on my characters. Are their motivations clear? Do the FMC and MMC have chemistry and witty banter that is fun to read? I would like a critique partner to send completed chapters to as I write. The overall plot might shift, but will stay true to the description above ^. The characters should meet the chemistry/banter requirements at every stage though!
Comparable Stories:
Inspirations: Butcher & Blackbird by Brynne Weaver, Lights Out by Navessa Allen, Rook & Rebel by Kate Crew
Trigger Warnings:
Murder, Killing, more to come
Manuscript Format
- Google Doc
- PDF