Defective | Sapphic Dystopia

All people do is lie, cheat and deceive. Cleo is no different. Most would say air is most precious, for the haze wreaks havoc on their land. Without air one is dead. But without control, insanity follows. Cleo prefers her food sorted before eaten, her plants watered at a specific time and all sensory stimuli dulled. When Cleo gets caught stealing from a farm during her first mission, she loses what she holds most dear control. Cleo's city pack abandons her, leaving her to work off the debt her packmates stole. The farm is completely different from the polluted city, and the longer Cleo stays, the more she wonders if going back, is even worth it. Defective is a sapphic apocalypse omegaverse that follows Cleo, a 23 year old, who only ever wanted to be accepted into her pack as an equal. Cleo gets caught stealing from Tori’s pack and makes a deal with Tori to work off her debt in exchange for freedom. This story deals heavily with mental health, trauma and death of loved ones.

Details

  • Age Group:Adult (18+)
  • Manuscript TypePartial Manuscript
  • Draft Number:Third Draft
  • Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 50,000
  • Spice Level3 Peppers (regular spice)

Primary Genre:

  • Dystopian

Themes & Tropes

  • Enemies-To-Lovers
  • LGBTQA+
  • Psychological
  • 18+

Requirements & Requests

Please be at least 18 years old. Looking for feedback on anything that was confusing, paced weirdly, or repetitive. As well as any other helpful insights and opinions on the story.

Trigger Warnings:

Trauma​/​PTSD Nightmares Mentioned past torture Deprivation of food​/​water Mental health Nightmares Panic attacks OCD tendencies (compulsive sorting, repetition) Omegaverse (secondary genders, scenting, heat​/​rut) Infertility mentioned Classism Blood mentioned Captivity​/​hostage Hallucinations

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