Demonic Scars

Turning into a demon wasn’t on Ember’s to-do list. Homework at Reed’s Lake Institute wasn’t supposed to be dangerous. Starting her third year of college in the heart of Grand Rapids, Ember struggles with juggling her part-time job at the coffee shop and studying for her witch internship. But when she accidentally summons a demon to her kitchen, it turns her life upside down, as classmates go missing and some end up dead. After transforming into a demon for the first time, Ember has to make the hard choices to keep her roommate safe from other demons and herself. Will she be the next one to disappear?

Details

  • Age Group:New Adult (18-25)
  • Manuscript TypeFull Manuscript
  • Draft Number:Draft 4+
  • Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 80,000
  • Spice Level1 Pepper (hardly any spice)

Story Type:

  • Novel

Primary Genre:

  • Fantasy
  • Mystery | Thriller | Crime

Themes & Tropes

  • Action & Adventure
  • Dark
  • Urban
  • Witches | Vampires | Werwolves

Requirements & Requests

I don't mind breaking it up to single chapters if need be. I'm really needing feedback on pacing, characters, and plot holes​/​problems.

Comparable Stories:

Dead Witch Walking by Kim Harrison, Magic Bites by Illona Andrews.

Trigger Warnings:

Adult language

Manuscript Format

  • Google Doc
  • PDF
  • DOC or .DOCX

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