Demonic Scars

When Ember accidentally summons a demon to her kitchen, she had no idea it would turn her life upside down. Classmates turn up missing and her semester has her juggling studying for exams, a part-time job at the local cafe, and investigating the missing persons. Will she be the next one to disappear?


  • Age Group:New Adult (18-25)
  • Manuscript TypePartial Manuscript
  • Draft Number:Draft 4+
  • Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 50,000
  • Spice Level1 Pepper (hardly any spice)

Primary Genre:

  • Fantasy
  • Mystery | Thriller | Crime

Themes & Tropes

  • Action & Adventure
  • Dark
  • Urban
  • Witches | Vampires | Werwolves

Requirements & Requests

I don't mind breaking it up to single chapters if need be. I'm really needing feedback on pacing, characters, and plot holes​/​problems.

Comparable Stories:

Dead Witch Walking by Kim Harrison, Magic Bites by Illona Andrews.

Trigger Warnings:

Adult language

Manuscript Format

  • Google Doc
  • PDF
  • DOC or .DOCX

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