From Heaven To Hell is a story about two serial killers. Two women just trying to live their lives as the most feared people in LA. That all change when one day a statement is released to the public, a message that the killers identities are not as well hidden as they think. Lucy Callaghan and Kali Hefferman now faces difficult choices as the fear of getting caught is right on their heels. Who is this mystery person and what exactly do they want? Those questions haunt Lucy as she juggles her life as the mastermind behind the persona 'The Blood Rite Killer' and her more difficult accomplice Kali. Kali is the mindless killer, the knife in Lucy's hand, but is that really all there is too her? Is she truly as heartless as she claims to be? This is a story about betrayal, regrett and finding once place in life. You are not born a villain, but rather something you are made by the enviroment around you.

Requirements & Requests

I am looking for someone who is interested in my story, I want an outside perspective on how the story flows, if the story is compelling and interesting. I would like to know if there is a point in the story where it is slow, unclear or boring. I would also want to know your opinion on the characters and if their motivations and personalities are clear. I want honest feedback. (Note: English is not my first language, the book is written in english but i am not in the stage where i edit the grammar to perfection, there may be some grammar mistakes i have missed when i reread the story.) I am open to critique partners. I read every genre, preferably something lgbtq+

Comparable Stories:

I don't know any book i'd compare this one too, but think Mafia, serial killers written from the killers pov and a bit of mystery.

Trigger Warnings:

There is themes of child abuse, vivid descriptions of torture and murder. Brief mentioning of SA