Hold on to Your Heart - Millennial love story

Olivia Clarke thought she had finally figured out who she was and what she wanted. At thirty-eight, she’s leaving behind her life in London for a fresh start in Vancouver with her partner, Graham. But a chance visit to her favourite bookshop changes everything. The last person Olivia ever expected to see again is Eamonn Murphy—the man who once meant everything to her. Fourteen years ago, they made a promise. He broke it. Now, he’s back in her life in the most unexpected way: through the pages of a book. His book. A novel inspired by their past, filled with memories Olivia tried to forget. As she unravels the story he has written, Olivia is forced to confront the painful truth: was it fate that tore them apart, or choices they were too afraid to make? And does reading their story mean she’s ready to rewrite the ending?

Details

  • Age Group:Adult (18+)
  • Manuscript TypeFull Manuscript
  • Draft Number:Final Draft
  • Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 100,00
  • Spice Level1 Pepper (hardly any spice)

Story Type:

  • Novel

Primary Genre:

  • Fiction

Themes & Tropes

  • Contemporary
  • Multi POV

Requirements & Requests

I am about to send my novel to a proofreader before I self-publish but want a few beta readers first to see if there are any major plot holes or inconsistencies. I'd like to know if there's enough tension throughout, if it's a compelling read, if you like the characters, anything you would put in a book review, really.

Comparable Stories:

One Day - David Nicholls Talking at Night - Claire Daverley

Manuscript Format

  • Google Doc
  • PDF
  • DOC or .DOCX

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