After decades of letting ideas simmer quietly in the background, I’ve finally brought my first novel to life. The spark was a group of curious students in my neuroscience class whose passion for learning reignited my own. Their questions, insights, and enthusiasm reminded me why I fell in love with science and storytelling. This novel centers on the journey of a research scientist whose work spans diverse organisms and disciplines, all in pursuit of one profound question: What are the evolutionary origins of empathy? Her story is both scientific and deeply human, weaving together the rigor of research with the emotional complexity of discovery. I’m now looking for thoughtful beta readers who can help me refine this manuscript. Whether you're drawn to character-driven narratives, fascinated by science, or simply love stories that explore what makes us human, I’d be grateful for your insights.

Requirements & Requests

General Impressions: What did you think of the story overall? Did it hold your interest? Character Feedback: Was the protagonist believable and compelling? Did her scientific journey feel authentic? Clarity of Science: Were the neuroscience concepts understandable and well-integrated into the narrative? Pacing: Did the story move at a good pace? Were there any parts that felt too slow or rushed? Emotional Resonance: Did the theme of empathy come through clearly? Did any scenes move you or feel especially powerful? Plot Consistency: Were there any confusing moments, plot holes, or unanswered questions? Voice and Style: Did the writing style feel engaging and appropriate for the story? Favorite​/​Least Favorite Parts: Which scenes stood out to you, and which ones didn’t quite land? Suggestions for Improvement: Any ideas for tightening the narrative, deepening characters, or clarifying themes?

Comparable Stories:

Lab Girl by Hope Jahren, Braiding Sweetgrass: Indigenous Wisdom, Scientific Knowledge, and the Teachings of Plants by Robin Wall Kimmerer Lessons in Chemistry by Bonnie Garmus