project - the wars against kaia.

kaia black was raised in isolation, she grew up with her uncle who trained her endlessly to endure a prophecy that was kept from her. kaia was taught how to hunt and survive without him, she never understood why untill she lost him, and was thrown into a world that saw her as the biggest threat. during the last war, kaias grandmother signed away her childrens claim of kingship before the gods, because they were only children. now they have their own children, and their claim was not forfeited.since the world was left without a specific heir, the realm split the land and created new kingdoms, and new laws. but the world being split left a large rift between each ruler. opening scene - Shivers coursed through Kaia’s body as she laid beneath the fading embers of a small fire, the absence of the sun robbed her of her strongest sense, leaving her unable to see beyond the line of trees that surrounded her. The crisp air had caused goosebumps to adorn her body beneath the somewhat thick fabric she wore, she had set off on a venture to see the world after 17 long, dreadful years of hiding, concealed behind a 100 ft wall. Life was good until being alone hit her. In the eerie and unfamiliar environment beyond the walls, Kaia found herself still alone, listening to the whistling winds A haze of mist hung low over the bed of the woods. The air, heavy with the scent of decaying wood, adding to the unsettling feel of the place. The dirty pants and jacket she wore, covered in mud, moss and her own sweat, clashed with her clean white eyes and neat black hair, as her fingers often ran through it desperate to find comfort in something well preparing herself for the long nights ahead. Her uncle often said the ring of black around her piercing white eyes was her soul, that her soul held both light and darkness, and that she would need to learn to control the darkness in her

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  • Age Group:New Adult (18-25)
  • Manuscript TypeSingle Chapter
  • Draft Number:First Draft (spell-checked)
  • Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 50,000
  • Spice Level1 Pepper (hardly any spice)

Primary Genre:

  • Fantasy
  • Historical Fiction

Themes & Tropes

  • Dark
  • Drama
  • High Stakes
  • Historical
  • Multi POV
  • War & Politics

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