Scourge: Hell's Bane

A story of feminine rage, resilience, and the divine. Proofreading needed (F14 author)

Details

  • Age Group:Young Adult (13-18)
  • Manuscript TypePartial Manuscript
  • Draft Number:Second Draft
  • Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 10,000 words
  • Spice LevelNo Spice

Story Type:

  • Novel

Primary Genre:

  • Fiction
  • Mystery | Thriller | Crime

Themes & Tropes

  • Action & Adventure
  • Complex World Building
  • High Stakes
  • Morally Grey
  • Mythology
  • Neurodivergent
  • No Romance
  • Paranormal

Requirements & Requests

Please, please, please don't be too harsh in the critique. I'm looking to see if it gets repetitive or boring and if I need to add things to deepen the story and descriptions. Thanks:)

Comparable Stories:

The story is so unique I can't find and haven't read anything similar

Trigger Warnings:

implied attempted SA blood and gore implied insanity mentions of child murder Depictions of violent death

Manuscript Format

  • Google Doc

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