Scourge: Hell's Bane
A story of feminine rage, resilience, and the divine. Proofreading needed (F14 author)
Details
- Age Group:Young Adult (13-18)
- Manuscript TypePartial Manuscript
- Draft Number:Second Draft
- Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 10,000 words
- Spice LevelNo Spice
Story Type:
- Novel
Primary Genre:
- Fiction
- Mystery | Thriller | Crime
Themes & Tropes
- Action & Adventure
- Complex World Building
- High Stakes
- Morally Grey
- Mythology
- Neurodivergent
- No Romance
- Paranormal
Requirements & Requests
Please, please, please don't be too harsh in the critique. I'm looking to see if it gets repetitive or boring and if I need to add things to deepen the story and descriptions. Thanks:)
Comparable Stories:
The story is so unique I can't find and haven't read anything similar
Trigger Warnings:
implied attempted SA blood and gore implied insanity mentions of child murder Depictions of violent death
Manuscript Format
- Google Doc