It's a story about a blogger, Darasimi who is hired by a very wealthy family - the Amadis - to live with them temporarily and document their lives, more specifically learn about the life of Lotanna a k.a Young Amadi who is responsible for the family's wealth and fame, and who died a year ago. During Darasimi's time there, he receives secret messages hinting that the death of Young Amadi was not natural, someone or everyone in the family could be responsible. There's more to the Amadis than the public is aware and even more secrets about Young Amadi that not even the family is aware of. Their all lying to themselves but to uncover the truth, Darasimi will have to risk his sanity. By the time he returns home from the job, he is traumatized man, a shadow of who he once was. This story uses three timelines, the major timeline is when Darasimi is working the Amadi's home (present), the past is the life of Young Amadi and his family when they are younger and poor, and the third is the aftermath (the future), when Darasimi returns home after discovering the truth and the chaos that followed. It is mostly mystery but also has a romance plotline.

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