Her past is hidden, both from others and herself. Working in an elite manor leads her to strange occurrences that prove more than a coincidence, especially with the sudden interest the Dark Lord has in her which is more than suspicious. She should be scared, but she can't help but be drawn towards him, a mistake she knows she might come to later regret... *** His heart aches whenever he looks at her, and not the normal kind. Something about her calls out to him, and he can't help but be curious. Still, when strange feelings begin to erupt inside him, he knows he has to put and end to them immediately. But he finds it hard to do so, even when it causes him pain... *Blurb is subject to change.*

Requirements & Requests

I’d love for you to highlight and leave comments on any of the following: 1. If there's anything that contradicts something earlier or doesn’t make sense. 2. If a section feels too slow, too fast, or pulls you out of the story. 3. If you spot areas where I’m telling more instead of showing. 4. If something feels like filler or drags the story down. 5. Does the setting feel immersive? Is it too vague, or does it need more detail?