The Havens & The Prophecy of The Stone

Twins, Maddie and Reece, are just trying to survive Middle School when they are transported into the magical land of Camellrya after meeting the author of their favorite book series. The book series they had read their whole lives about this fict–well, apparently real land. To make matters worse, this isn’t the Camellrya they read about–where dragons, fairies, and humans all exist in harmony (for the most part). No, this Camellrya is cursed. With time running out, the Haven twins find themselves embarking on a thrilling adventure across an unknown land. Assisted by a courageous mouse and a grumpy fairy, they need to locate the fabled stone mentioned in the prophecy. However, the prophecy only speaks of one and neither of them can figure out which one of them it is. Can they find the stone no one has ever seen and figure out who is meant to break the one hundred year curse before they and the rest of Camellrya disappear forever?


  • Age Group:Middle Grade (8-12)
  • Manuscript TypeFull Manuscript
  • Draft Number:Draft 4+
  • Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 80,000
  • Spice LevelNo Spice

Primary Genre:

  • Fantasy

Themes & Tropes

  • Action & Adventure
  • High Stakes
  • Multi POV

Requirements & Requests

I would like a focus on the world building, plot, and characters as a whole with any feedback. But I am open to any notes or opinions on the work as long as worded respectfully.

Comparable Stories:

The Land of Stories Narnia Maybe Percy Jackson

Trigger Warnings:

Mentions of: Social anxiety bullying parental death in the past foster care system grieving

Manuscript Format

  • Google Doc

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