The ocean mourns, and so does its new master. When Poseidon falls, his twin brother, Pelorion, is forced to claim the domain he never desired. But something far more dangerous than grief looms beneath the waves. The gods are not as untouchable as they believed, and Olympus is desperate to find out why.

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