To save Cedorriath from her father’s invading army, a fiery princess must master both her courage and the powers given to her people by the island’s mysterious race of Ancients with the help of her loyal sisters, most trusted advisors, and a handsome green-eyed thief.

Requirements & Requests

I want any thoughts on this writing and anyone who would be interested in reading the rest of the manuscript as well! I am happy to exchange feedback and read other works. I also need help figuring out what to cut. I'm at almost 200k words and need help getting it down. I'm just not sure what is good and should be kept so any advice would be much appreciated!

Comparable Stories:

The Princess Bride, The Assasin's Blade, Maze Runner, with writing sometimes similar to Madeline Miller's Circe and Song of Achilles.

Trigger Warnings:

Parental loss, loss of a partner, torture, slight graphic descriptions of battle, witchcraft, language