Three Women/thriller
One is a once rich woman. A once married woman. A once in love woman who gets thrown into a mental care faculty by her husband when she starts showing too many signs of instability in their two and a half years of their marriage. She goes by the name Royal Montgomery. Royal's state only gets worse though, when six months later, he visits her with another woman and a divorce paper. Another woman is in the picture now. Valeria Vanderbilt. A woman who marries Royal's ex husband, Blad Deliehde. She was a former fashion icon. But now,she is a woman determined to be the perfect house wife. After Royal is released from the mental faculty, she is constantly trying to get her husband's attention which throws Valeria off. But she tries to be patient. What husband loves a jealous wife right? Wait, yet another woman is in the picture. Or was... Anaya Quelisten is now a broke and miserable woman working three part time jobs, trying to get her life back. But she has not always been like this. She had a life. A good one at that. She used to work for a private company as a secretary for five years. But she makes a mistake of having a little crush for her boss. On the night she decides to confess, risking it all, he asks her to help him pick an engagement ring for someone else. Into his six months of marriage though, he makes a move on her. They date for weeks if not months, when out of the blue he decides she is out of the picture. It has been two years and a half since she is fired and miserable. It is one unfortunate night though, where the three women's fate cross with eachother. One unfortunate night where all the three women are taken into questioning to the police station as suspects to the murder of Blad Deliehde. Did any of them really kill him? Or...is there someone else that wants him dead, or wants them behind bars?..
Details
- Age Group:New Adult (18-25)
- Manuscript TypePartial Manuscript
- Draft Number:First Draft (spell-checked)
- Word Count (Rounded Up):Up to 80,000
- Spice Level5 Peppers (all the spice)
Story Type:
- Novel
Primary Genre:
- Mystery | Thriller | Crime
Themes & Tropes
- Mystery
- Multi POV
- Psychological
- Villain POV
Requirements & Requests
I am looking for real and honest feedback.
Manuscript Format
- Google Doc