Haunted by a reoccurring dream Adelaide is kidnapped to a magical realm where she finds her name has been planned in attendance since the existence of the university. Being an arcane, a child of an old one, creates a target on her back. Adelaide must balance her course work while unraveling the plentiful mysteries that surround her. When it’s discovered a secret society is after her power her dream and reality begin to converge. With the help of her friends they must create a plan to stop the society from using her power to take control of the realm.

Requirements & Requests

Looking for general feedback especially on pacing. I want the first chapter to move quickly but I worry it moves too quickly for readers.

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Stories of similar vibes: The magicians, Chilling adventures of Sabrina, deadly class